We got together and had a mini crit as a few of us were at different stages of briefs that needed some overseeing. I took the Posh Nosh brief as I had come to such a stand still and felt it wasn't improving or going anywhere but a decision needed to made.
I went through the packaging position explaining how it had to show these two contrasting elements. I explained how I was struggling to get a balance and felt it was to empty and then to busy. I ended on the stopped back bread packaging which I then tested on milk and beans. Although I said I didn't think it worked for beans the people in the crit, who had fresh eyes, said they thought it did but just needed less text.
They much preferred the stripped back look and really disliked the man. The stripped back was both basic but also 'posh' style.
Other things mentioned:
- the shopping bag for the food hall - could create one for the range (bag for life)
- the bread packaging like the plastic shopping bag they use to provide
- it could be a running campaign for a couple of months just to promote the food section of the store
(have to consider the audience there and the purpose of the range - people don't want to be called posh and some people do get there groceries there)
- think a milk bottle would be better than the plastic carton - more selfridges and still basics range as was originally provided in milk bottle
(I had considered this but wanted to keep the packaging the bog standard of today range however now reconsidering I think it would suit selfridges image more)
- they agreed I should keep everything yellow - strong/bold impact - would buy it purely for that reason
- forget the food info on the packaging - its a novelty range so all that health guidelines could be provided on the bag
I've cut down the text to create a better balance and removed the food chart icon
I've extended it across the other items of food as mock ups of the layout
I also attempted mock ups of the packaging applied to the real format in order to taste how the overall atheistic would look in context.